|06-30-2007, 12:03 PM||#5|
This is my territory. SHUT THE FUCK UP AND GET THE FUCK OUT!
PASTOR OF THE CHURCH OF TRIPLE H
OVER 6 YEARS OF EXCELLENCE ON TPWW.NET
Keep On Bitching. Keep On Watching.
|06-30-2007, 12:55 PM||#8|
Ride the Stimutacs
Okay, so the first thing I'm noticing here is that you have a website that is only for an efed, and the entire thing is just a discussion board. However, that's okay, that just shows the effort your going to place into other sutff, like the creation of the logo you don't even have. Wow...it look like you place alot of effort into giving this fed a personal look that separates you from everyone else and makes me want to join.
Oh wow, look at this. I'm looking at your application forum here and your bringing in some major stars here aren't you. Already got Randy Orton and Jeff Hardy to come in. I guess they heard about your little shin dig and thought that could get a fresh start with you. Or in reality you have a real wrestler efed, which always proves to bring in the best of the efed world. Seriously, how can anyone compete with an efed that's sure to produce great RPs like...
He comes to the ring.
"I'm going to kick your ass BROTHER!!! WHOOOOO!!!!"
Seriously, those efeds with members that make roleplays worthy enough to be short stories will have nothing on your roster of 3 liners.
Oh, and look at this....ANOTHER federation that splits up there roleplay boards. Yea, because making sperate roleplay boards for different shows REALLY encourages creative roleplays. Sure, other federations would carry one roleplaying board for everyone to easily interact with each other and encourage spontanious roleplaying, but keeping it organized show by show so people don't keep up with every roleplay and get confused on what's going on is a great way to go.
Oh, and going back to bringing in the stars, I got a better look at your staff. JR...The King...JBL...looks like you're just robbing people from them left and right. Hell...now that I get a better look at you, your MVP! I guess it takes the most valuable player to have the most valuable efederation, right.
No. In reality you are a novice efed owner with probably no experience as a staff member and no idea on proper efed etiquette. You simple openned up a efed on a free discussion board, and set it up as a real wrestler fed because of lack of creativity. You don't even have the skill to properly promote it. I know that you won't attract enough people to keep it running, not to mention your laziness in the setup alone proves that you will lack the skills to do a e-wrestling results every week. You're fed won't last longer than this week, and all you will have done was give us a good laugh at this pitiful attempt to open one. I give your fed 5 days before it's offically dead, and that's being generous.
try actually learning more about efedding and how it works before you think you can actually jump in and run one...because you don't have it.
I give your fed 1 out of 5 stars...though my ratings may be off by a one star margin.
Last edited by JT; 06-30-2007 at 01:14 PM.