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dylb 09-14-2016 03:32 PM

I Finished My Demo And I'm Happy Of The Way It Turned Out
 
Thanks for being open enough to let me share some tunes with you.

I'm on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/dylanbriscall

All the songs on Early Mornings, Late Nights, and Long Roads were written and composed by me and were produced by Joel Kazmi--who’s worked with artists like The Tea Party, Rush, N’sync, Sum 41, and Anne Murray.

If you don't want to listen that is absolutely cool and if you can recommend some new music or mention any great shows you've seen lately, that would be great.

Cheers!

RP 09-14-2016 05:26 PM

I need to know i'm not clicking on something that will fuck my computer in the butt. Convince me and i'll listen.

Mercenary 09-14-2016 05:55 PM

seems fishy

RP 09-14-2016 05:59 PM

I lisented.

The instrumentals are horrible in the backroom. It need a lot more edge. The first 30 seconds sounds like something my gradmother would listen to on her soft rock channels. After that it started to get good, then came the hook. It was so soft. Change up the instrumentals a bit. Speed the songs up and dont make the song such a whiney baby thing aboug searching for love. Ad some material into it. Give it more edge. Right now that song wouldnt even be considered for a wedding. Step it up. Get more edgy.

RP 09-14-2016 06:01 PM

The instrumentals are all wrong. I think you going for a Jack Mannequine sound and its failing badlly

RP 09-14-2016 06:04 PM

I'm on the 3rd song

RP 09-14-2016 06:07 PM

I really like the 3rd song, but i think a stronger backround instrumental would bring it to life... It's too folk song . Way to folk song. Let it live. man. Add harder instruments. Put an electric guitar in there. That 3rd song is beggin go live. Let it live.

RP 09-14-2016 06:10 PM

The 3rd song is your best, But all of them need to be let out instrumentally. They all sound like something that was produced on windows 3.1. Need harder instruments. You could really do something with the 3rd song. The first 2 are kinda junk. Good luck with those. Focus on the 3rd and make it a bit edgier.

SlickyTrickyDamon 09-14-2016 08:30 PM

Who told you of this place? First post and you're asking for something? Get the fuck outta here.

Shisen Kopf 09-19-2016 10:15 AM

This isn't Noya Perez STD

Big Vic 09-19-2016 11:05 AM

"Pay yer dues"

Rammsteinmad 09-19-2016 02:02 PM

I don't really give a fuck about a guy who joins a wrestling website and his first post is trying to advertise his shitty music.


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