[The One]

Originally Posted by Blakeamus criticism is welcomed.

Originally Posted by Gorgeous Dale Newstead You guys can work no doubt, and there's a decent crowd, but your look is awful, like you legit look bush league beyond all recognition. And you need to stop doing other guys' moves. You don't need to do 241351 high impact moves a match. Tell a story, lead to high spots. You don'tneed to angle slam/stunner/tarantula a guy all in the same match. Get your own unique offence, or I mean if you're going to do other guys' moves (cuz let's face it, it's all been done) only do one of them, not every single finisher from the early 2000s. I saw a spear, a stone cold stunner, a super kick, an angle slam etc. like what the fuck dude hahaha. You quite clearly have the intensity and the ability, just wrestle like a wrestler, and not a mark for yourself and other wrestlers. And for god's sake do something about your attire. I mean you're in there busting your ass and bumping like a motherfucker, but you look like a backyard wrestler. You're only doing yourself a disservice.

Originally Posted by Blakeamus This vid that was put togather shown the most impact moves of the matches...I do just wrestle...but I just added all the key "mark out" spots. The spear was a desperation move...HE had me in a masterlock and switched it over to a stunner...superkick was a desperation move... Do you consider Homicide a backyarder with what he wears? He has a unique style with a shirt, elbow pads, wrestling gear etc. My trunks are the MMA Warrior brand and I do happen to wear a shirt to wrestle in from time to time. I'm far beyond a backyarder, trust me.

So by "criticism welcomed" what you REALLY meant to say was "If you think I'm awesome, tell me. But if you have LEGIT constructive criticism, keep it to your damn self." I mean my god, he started off by saying you could work. But that wasn't enough, as soon as he made suggestions on how to improve, you reacted like a child and got defensive. He was offering suggestions, and for what it's worth not only does he come from a background where he would be qualified to make suggestions, but they happened to be true. First you're all up in arms about your look, and then a couple posts later your talking about how you're going to change it. So apparently you already were aware your image didn't present a professional. When you dress like a backyard wrestler, that's the first thing people think. Why stake the decks against you? It does look second rate when you're out there in a Punisher T-Shirt.

As for his notes about you hit too many high spots, from the video I saw, it's totally true. There was a lot of flash in there, and I understand in a highlight video you're not going to show any real psychology, how could you? It's a HIGHLIGHT video. But it certainly seemed like there was a LARGE number of high spots in a FEW matches. Which leads to the natural assumptions. The first of which is, you are a mark for yourself, and you really want to hit all your best shit all the time. In your intro you felt the need to tell us that this angle was the best thing going in your promotion. Why the fuck would we care what YOUR perception of YOUR angle was? Again, nothing definitive, but it does lead to the conclusion you think you're some pretty awesome shit. Coupled with the fact that you went into high defense the second someone suggested ways to improve tells me you think you know it all already. Which, again, kind of inching towards that conclusion of you mark for yourself all over again doesn't it?

In the end, I have a couple notes I could give that I saw, some things that I would suggest, but I have a feeling it would fall on deaf ears and you likely wouldn't even finish what I wrote before you started in on why I am/was wrong. Hope you grow up son, you've obviously got some good skill, but it appears to me you lack the discipline to get better. And I've seen a LOT of those guys come and go........