Ok here's what I think:
- the music is a little off at the begining, a silence before it kicks in while the action is already rolling
- Nice use of clips/stills, which are in time with the music
- The Darkness
- The clock says it lasts for 3.19 although it stopped after 31 seconds, not sure if that is ment to happen or if it got screwed up at some point
Not bad though, if it goes on longer its showing promise, if not, it wasn't bad for a 30 second skit.