finally had a chance to skim through them. I'm going to review them as honestly as I could. please don't take offense if I am harsh.
VCW
I can't stand Michael Cole, so I would of turned this one off immediately. Nothing going on in the opening segment at all. You went from Cole giving his introduction speech right into a match. There needed to be somehting more to open the show. This is a new show. You have the audience as soon as it starts. You need to do something to make them stay and giving them a Cole promo with nothing more doesn't really add any intrigue to the promotion. The opening segment and your closing should of been the most imporant parts of the show.
Your very first match ever for the promotion is the USO's vs The Dudleys? Would of turned this off as well. The Dudleys are has beens and the Uso's have done nothing so far. I would of opened with your 3rd match.
Loved the Hulk/Joe perfect thing. That's your show stealer. That puts Perfect over as huge and the star of your promotion right now. Good placement with this segment. You maybe could of stage for this in your opening segment.
The main event was a good main event in terms of talent. I don't like the mystery angle here though. It's too soon. It screams TNA. And I would of reversed it and had HHH getting attacked and not Lethal if you want to end the show with an Impact. Unless you're building a feud with Lethal vs mystery guy. I wouldn't think HHH would care that much with Lethal getting attacked right now. They don't really have a relationship yet. So that whole ending seemed forced to me.
Overall, ok show. You've got good talent. You need better tag teams though. your teams are awful.
LAW
My fav show my far. I LOVED how you open this talking about an Incident involving NY/WWE. Excellent job there. I am intrigued and I am staying put to see what you are talking about
Love the broacast team as it's nobody I know. Gives everything a brand new and original feel. Same thing with Jim Gorman. Again, it's a fresh character that you've created. I like it.
Love the first match as Barrett is a hot star right now and so is Dinero.
I didn't think you could get Tarver over right away, but that's a fucking promo. It's quick, it's to the point and it gets the message across. Who wouldn't hire this guy?
The segment with Jericho and Show was good. This sets up your main event.
I'm not really a fan of Justin Gabriel and think Morgan can be used better for the future. You should probably just have Morgan beat the shit out of Gabriel.
The ending was awesome with John Cena. Nice suspense and I loved him with street clothes. This makes me think of the Incident you alluded to in the beginning.
Overall: My fav show. Good work.
Dead Wrong Wrestling
ugh, I'm sorry, but the paragraphs need to go. I can't take that. I had a really tough time reading this. Don't get me wrong, you've got great talent and the Miz/Funk segent was amazing, but I just hate reading paragraphs. I'm sure other people on here love it though.
This is Wrestling
My 2nd fav show. If you're not going to open up with a promo and decide to get right to the wrestling, I'm good with that. Your first match was a great opener and love the Guererro/Hernandez pairing. Makes a lot of sense.
LOVE the Nash/Sheamus segment. Great build
And I love how you continue the segments throughout the show. Later on you how Hernandez and Chavo again and you continue the Nash/Sheamus thing and add more players to it. A show works best when you do this in my opinion. There's a flow to it and you build up to the ending.
Here's what I did not like. You built Sheamus the entire night and then you have him take the pin in the main event via Foley.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING????? Sheamus had all this heat on him and then you let him get one upped by the babyface commish on the 1st show. You went all WWE Universe here.
And then to make matters worse for Sheamus, you plug in Taker and take the focus off Sheamus/Foley and now it's on Taker/Foley. I think you did too much here and should of saved Taker for later. Build towards his arrival.
But overall the show was really good. I hated the lst 5 minuts though.
SCW:
Another long one. You went the obvious rout and used Flair as the commish, but it works. I don't mind it. The show above used Foley and that was good as well.
LOVE the Flair/Punk segment. very good stuff there. makes a ton of sense and the two characters clash. I would love to see a progression where slowly the audience turns on Flair and starts cheering Punk and his good ways.
I also like the tag teams you have. I love tag wrestling and you have a good division. The main event was also pretty good, but nothing really happened at the end. This show reminds me of ROH. Not a lot of storylines and interview segment, but a lot of pure wrestling. It's not my favorite type of wrestling, but it does appeal to a lot of posters here.
well that's that. like I said, don't take the negative commenrs to heart. remmeber, I'm only 1 reader.
good job to everyone for taking the time to write all that out. lord knows I can't do that anymore.