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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
So, the grudge match between HBK and Batista is ended in a no contest and nothing is solved. So far off to a retarded start.
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Shawn Michaels and Batista are going to be feuding way past Backlash. A clean fall, especially with Jericho in there serving as referee, is not going to do anything other than set one guy at a disadvantage. A win by Michaels, in particular, would turn the fans further against Big Dave.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
We just got Vince of the air, why bring him in? Also...why make it into a 5 way match only to make it into a 6 man? I know this went from a singles to a 3 way to a 4 way all in one night, but that is retarded.
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We need to get Jericho in there. Sure, we can just have Jericho pop up on the graphic. Vince is a tool for the story, he can be replaced with Shane, Linda, the Board of Directors, or anyone with power. You don't even need to show Vince. Him returning to TV is not an issue here.
Adding two men at once would be a lot to suddenly process. You have to explain how someone gets in there. Plus, this started off as Randy Orton vs. JBL, and then added Triple H, then added Cena, as you said. You're adding one guy at a time. Jericho actually gets into the match because Regal opens the door. He opens the door, because with his return to active competition and his newfound power, he has the audacity to alter the main event like that. The main event is already not as advertised, why not make it even?
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
Wait, now you made it into a tag match? I was under the impression that it was every man for themselves, not tags and stupid crap like that. Getting past that, how is Jericho getting dqed because Shawn Micheals was getting revenge from earlier in the night turn HHH heel? Also, you are rushing this. Micheals should be getting his revenge on Raw at the very earlier, not the same night at Backlash. Also, why would Jericho chase after Shawn Micheals and get dqed from a title match he moments ago just bitched and moaned about getting into. I'm assuming Jericho has been turned heel during all of this as well. Because Bats and HBK are for the most part face right now. None of this makes any sence, you are fucking retarded.
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Yeah, I made it a Six-Way Elimination Match where two guys are legal. That way you can avoid the horrible cliches of guys spilling out to the ring conveniently.
Triple H does not turn heel by this very act, moron. Also, Jericho doesn't get DQ'd. Michaels attacks Jericho, and thus Jericho's chances of winning the WWE Title are hindered by outside interference. The rules state that is worthy of a disqualification. Seeing as Triple H and Shawn Michaels are buddies, the referee is further justified in his call of disqualifying the legal man against Jericho, Triple H, for this. Of course, this does not sit well with Triple H, who is none too happy with HBK's inability to stay out of his match. This is part of a build.
I agree that I am rushing this. I originally had written in my post that I was getting Jericho there as quickly as possible. I am definitely rushing it. However, I think it would give the fans watching the event a little satisfaction to see Michaels get revenge from a little earlier. Well, try to get revenge. Jericho doesn't get counted out, on purpose. He is brawling with HBK, and the referee is counting to keep integrity of the contest. Security and other referees are all over Michaels and Jericho, which keeps Jericho from making it back to the ring. It's a little messy, yes, but it is a way to get Jericho out of the match.
I was going to have Jericho make it back to the ring, and then play injured on the outside, or something, and actually take the title. There are a million ways you can take these things. I just listed one. Oh, and Jericho is the Jericho he is now. A face with heel tendencies.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
Still don't understand why Regal needs to be in this already clusterfuck of a match.
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Regal is in the match because he is the RAW General Manager, he has the confidence boost and testosterone flowing from dominating the King of the Ring Tournament. He wants to be WWE Champion.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
HBK and Batista should be looking for Jericho, and Jericho has no right coming out because he inserted himself in at the last minute and then ran off. He is being very heelish right now. Why would he walk into a ring with HBK who has beef with him, and HHH who has never like him standing in the middle of the ring? That is not a smart thing to do, therefore not a heel thing to do.
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I was going to give Jericho more of a face clarity, but it doesn't really make sense given his current character. It's an interesting thing they've got him doing. He's neither a face nor a heel. When he wrestles, he often plays a sympathetic guy, and he is yet to do much too evil on the microphone, except play antagonist to babyfaces. He's in an organic place at the moment, where he is so cocky that he thinks he can get away with whatever he wants.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
At this point, HHH hasn't had his singles match with Orton. Why even inject Jericho in this? You are forcing Jericho instead of building Jericho. This is why people hate Cena, and hated Batista because the were put there instead of earning their way to the top.
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Jericho is in this because he holds a (highly controversial) technical win over Shawn Michaels and Batista. He's in this because he did not take a pin or submit (which in WWE language means undefeated). He has a technical claim to the title, too, as does Triple H. That Triple H is not getting it is more fuel to the fire of his character.
People hate Cena and Batista because they are bland babyfaces. Batista was never forced on the fans. I'd also argue that he isn't hated anywhere but in smark crowds, anyway. He is pushed as Superman, true, but Jericho isn't being pushed as Superman. This whole scenario is just one of the ways to get Jericho back into the main event scene, there's no use complaining about Jericho being added in there.
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HHH would never let Jericho be booked over him, tainted win or not. Also, i don't recall big Dave being barred from the ring or anything like that. He should have attacked Jericho and helped HHH get the win. HHH wouldn't care, he was about to smash Jericho with a sledge hammer anyhow.
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Batista is actually an intelligent character. He is when he is switched on, anyway. He knows Triple H doesn't want anyone in his business. By appearing on the stage, Batista was letting Jericho know he is still going to get him, and was providing a distraction. Jericho managed to use his environment to his advantage, and take the match. This way Batista, who didn't want to get physically involved like Michaels, still manages to cost Triple H the win (in a way), which fuels Triple H's decision to start burning bridges.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
Why would a heel Jericho put his title on the line when he already has the title shot he wanted? That isn't a smart thing to do, therefore not a heel thing to do. Now if Jericho is suppose to be a face through all of this, it is retarded. Also, come to think of it, why are we have a heel v heel match, those never draw.
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Jericho isn't choosing to put his title on the line. William Regal, who is still RAW General Manager, is making a big match for the hell of it. Both titles on the line boost the interest that goes with the match, seeing as Jericho is in his tweener role, and Orton is a heel. This isn't really heel vs. heel, but there was apparently a match once between Pat Patterson & Gerald Brisco and The Mean Street Posse that was actually a bizarrely highly rated TV segment. Heel vs. heel matches can have a place when there is the right story behind them (for example, Kurt Angle vs. Triple H from 2000/2001).
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
No, this is all crap.
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No, you are crap. Actually, I respect your opinion, but you don't agree with anything I say even when our points match perfectly, so you carry very little weight with me.
I literally free wrote that, without planning the angle. It was an "as I go" exercise, but I feel that everything is justified, even if things get a bit messy. I think that faces are too goody these days, and that heels are often too cartoony, and that there should be more of a blurred line, but even I would like more clarity with it. However, it stays in touch with all their current characters.
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Originally Posted by BigDaddyCool
No, this again just forces Jericho into the title picture and makes him a defacto maineventer, not a real one. There is no build here. You just forced him into a series of matches to become champion with after the fact building of fueds. You ignored all the obvious fueds that could get Jericho into a mainevent position. This is the first time I've ever read one of your storyline ideas in earnest. Glad I never have before. This is also the last time.
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A defacto main eventer? You mean like Randy Orton was forced? Jericho has been a main eventer before, even if you don't concede that he has. Jericho can be welcomed very easily back, and it's not like we're building Nunzio for a World Title run here.
As I said, the build was rushed, and it was freestyled, but there is build there. Every move is, largely, justified. You just don't like it because you're Republican. The King of the Ring and William Regal open the floodgates. I didn't highlight that part of the story, but I thought most people would be able to pick it up. Regal adds himself into a main event, which gives Jericho a hole he is able to squeeze through. From there, Jericho is not defeated in the main event, he makes a case to the GM, and he gets a title shot. He wins it, and from there he wins the belt. It's short, but it's a quick way to get the WWE Title on Jericho. If you want me to build a year-long chase for Jericho, we can do that, too.
Also, BDC, I know you've got that thick skin, so it probably hasn't sunk in yet, but I really do not care what you think about anything. I personally am offended that you'd end up the audience for something I'd written. Demographics and all that.
But thank you for actually taking the time to reply. I'm going to positive rep you for that. Also because you didn't sound like an idiot.