Original Lyrics

[The Forgotten One]

Anybody thats writes lyrics, post them in here. I wanna see other people's work and I want people to see mine. Heres a few of mine from another thread.

Here's some stuff I've wrote. http://frozeninsinlyrics.tripod.com/ Thats my site.


"Dusk 'Til Dawn" Lyrics:Blalock / 9/30/03

Dusk settles around you
Tear the flesh off the new
Sun sets to reveal the war
Fight 'till evil is no more

(Chorus)
Fight for your life from dusk 'till dawn
You must destroy what evil has spawn
Relive the pain everyday
Killing is the only way

Night starts to surround you
Pick your weapons from the few
Desimation is to be
Find the ones to be set free

(Chorus)

Dawn gathers around you
Refresh yourself with the dew
Morning breaks to reveal
The rawness of the deal


"I Cannot Win" Lyrics:Blalock / Music:Crow / 9/25/03

Turn back the hands of time
Create life before you die
Look whats underneath the rine
Destroy everything thats mine

(Chorus)
I must find away
To keep from the decay
Memories die within
The war I cannot win

Take the breathe away from me
Cut down your family tree
Forget life and let it be
It's somthing you don't need

(Chorus)

How much more can I take
Spend the money that I make
Heal your bones after they break
Put the icing on the cake


"Lost All Control" Lyrics:Blalock & Crow Music:Crow / 1/15/04


I sat up all night again
Untill the morning light
Something is evil within
And it's dying to fight

I'm not under my control
Walking into the night
Others now start to follow
Fighting back with all my might

Killing takes over my mind
Blood splatters over me
We've killed all of our kind
Theres nothing left to see

Lost all control
Lost all control
Lost all control
Lost all control


"No Where To Go" Lyrics:Blalock & Copeland Music:Crow 1/24/04

Found myself coming across another road
How will I find which way for me to go
I'm lost with no map and no one to help me
I need directions and good eyes to see

(Chorus)
I have no where to go
Watching my life unfold
All I see is emptyness
Now I begin to confess

I open my heart and let everything out
But theres no one around to hear me shout
I start to kneel down and confess all my sins
Then someone tells me this is not the end

(Chorus)

I'm told that my life has only just begun
That I'm no longer his forgotten son
If I continue down this road I'll reach my goals
And break away from the other lost souls


"See The One" Lyrics: Blalock & Crow / Music: Crow / 8/21/03

Plant the seed and it will grow
Do the deed and it will show
Push the knife and you will bleed
Open your eyes and you will see

(Chorus)
See the one you'll never be
Livin' a life filled with glee
No hatred just harmony

Light the fuse and it will burn
Stand in line and wait your turn
Go to sleep and you will wake
Ignore the lies you know are fake

(Chorus)

Cause the problem and you will blame
Commit the crime and feel the shame
Start a riot and the streets will fill
Pull the trigger and the blood will spill

[el fregadero]

Note to all you with what you personally would consider good lyrics: don't post them anywhere.

[The Forgotten One]

Note to all you with what you personally would consider good lyrics: don't post them anywhere.

EDIT: Until I'm sure how that "comment" is susposed to be directed, I'll stay quiet.

[Krow]

Or maybe he was saying that so nobody loses their material to some lazy/crafty producer/thief.

Guilty conscience?

[Krow]

It does help, though, to be gramatically correct.

[The Forgotten One]

Or maybe he was saying that so nobody loses their material to some lazy/crafty producer/thief.

Guilty conscience?

If it was for that reason, then I look pretty stupid.

But if I had asked if it was a cheap shot at my writing, and it turned out to be, I would still look stupid.

[asphyXy]

<font color=969696>Civil Atrophy's newest song

"A Dying Aura" by Civil Atrophy

[Prologue]
Battle of greed with no survivors
The cloth continues to disintegrate
Leaving the headstrong to cover up
To provide the dearest with a proper fate

In the search for accomplice
She's left out in the cold
Dubbed absurd by those who loved her most
She contravenes this time, alone

One guarding repute
The other: misconduct in mourning
One procrastinates self realization
The other, constructing her lapse

[chorus]
Power uncontrolled
Treacherous tyranny
All will manifest in the end
When egos die

But he has no bias
She's begging for leniency
Requests fallen on deaf ears
With a final edict of starvation

The vigilant [the loyal]
Drag the sinner back
Transcendence without the expected culmination

It was all in the darkened prophet's forecast

"What use for me, ill-starred one
To look to any god for relief
Or to call on any friends for aid?
For holiest deed I bear this charge of rank
Unholiness"

Suicide in a paroxysm
The victim's love bleeds eternal
All eyes are on Creon
as his repute loses value

Suicide in a paroxysm
Now mourning over wife and child
The maiden's neck
Entwined by a linen band

[chorus]

"And in the things that touch upon the gods
It is best, in word or deed,
To shun unholy pride"</font>

[Mic Blaze]

I got so many lyrics I can spare a song

SOON YOU'LL UNDERSTAND
(Mike Game)
Ma you dont understand cuz ya cryin and ya hurt. But you gon understand watch.

(Singer overlaps Mike Game)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand

(Verse 1)
I never thought itd be like this,you know what we went through
Ten years from now thought I still see myself wit you
They say change is gon happen and that its somethin good
Ive seen the results I dont think its somethin good
Still cant go to Burger King cuz itll never be the same
The place we first met brings a nigga to pain
Ive called you a few times to say that I miss you
Remember you said you liked the way I kissedou
I wanna call again but I know youll prolly just hang up
People used to say we was dreamin and needed to wake up
I guess we finally awakened when we decided to break up
That fourth and final time cuz we'd usually just make up
You knew my lifestyle the things that I did
You knew I wasnt a manogamist type kid
But I wanted you enough to give up all them other girls
You made my decision of havin only one chick in my world
Pain is love is the only truth Ja ever really spoke
Cant really move on cuz my heart will be forever broke

(Singer)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand

(Mike Game)
I told you I wasnt the relationship type
But for you I tried
I wanna say Im sorry but I cant bring myself to it

(Singer)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand

(Verse 2)
Like I was Jiggaman girl you was my SUNSHINE
Though the break up decision was mine
I got scared cuz you mentioned the love word
Though I felt it I never said it before
Not like that but Ive said it to my mother
Just never to my significant other
Got you upset had you screamin at me
Throwin things yellin "How could you do this to me?"
I didnt have the answer so I started yellin back
Slipped up called you a bitch and I got smacked
I seen the tears fall to the floor
As you left exitin the door
Called the next day but your mom picked up the phone
I was standin outside and I knew you was at home
But she said you wasnt and not to call again
Thats when the final heartbreak started to begin

(Singer)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand

(Mike Game)
I dont cry but this wouldve brought on the tears
I mean look at the history 3 years together
Kinda like a mini life

(Singer)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand

(Verse 3)
Bout a year done passed since you and me spoke last
My cold heart is beginnin to heal you can say its in a cast
Think bout you every so often but I done moved on,
but I think bout what we had
All of it,the nice,the,ugly,the good and the bad
Just wanna let you know I did love you,though its too late for that
Just lettin you know that if you need me Ill come right back
If you ever need somethin Im never too far just call
Ill drop everything Im doin I drop it all
Got a new girl in my life she's sweet like you
But I dont do her like I used to treat you
I guess you was one of them one and gone types
Only get her once cuz once shes gone shes gonethat I dont like
It seems that basically no girl could ever compare
But I dont even feel like takin this there
Girl I never ever meant to make you sad nor cry
Im sorry forever takt this as my final goodbye

(Singer)
Let him hold you
Let him touch you
Soon youll un-der-stand
(repeat 6x)