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05-10-2004, 05:58 PM
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Thread Killer
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Original Lyrics
Anybody thats writes lyrics, post them in here. I wanna see other people's work and I want people to see mine. Heres a few of mine from another thread.
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05-10-2004, 08:29 PM
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Tap-In
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Note to all you with what you personally would consider good lyrics: don't post them anywhere.
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05-11-2004, 04:47 AM
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Last edited by The Forgotten One; 05-11-2004 at 05:29 AM. |
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05-11-2004, 04:51 AM
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The Enigma
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Or maybe he was saying that so nobody loses their material to some lazy/crafty producer/thief.
Guilty conscience? |
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05-11-2004, 04:51 AM
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The Enigma
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It does help, though, to be gramatically correct.
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05-11-2004, 05:21 AM
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But if I had asked if it was a cheap shot at my writing, and it turned out to be, I would still look stupid. |
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05-11-2004, 08:52 AM
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Chill out, dickwad.
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Civil Atrophy's newest song
"A Dying Aura" by Civil Atrophy [Prologue] Battle of greed with no survivors The cloth continues to disintegrate Leaving the headstrong to cover up To provide the dearest with a proper fate In the search for accomplice She's left out in the cold Dubbed absurd by those who loved her most She contravenes this time, alone One guarding repute The other: misconduct in mourning One procrastinates self realization The other, constructing her lapse [chorus] Power uncontrolled Treacherous tyranny All will manifest in the end When egos die But he has no bias She's begging for leniency Requests fallen on deaf ears With a final edict of starvation The vigilant [the loyal] Drag the sinner back Transcendence without the expected culmination It was all in the darkened prophet's forecast "What use for me, ill-starred one To look to any god for relief Or to call on any friends for aid? For holiest deed I bear this charge of rank Unholiness" Suicide in a paroxysm The victim's love bleeds eternal All eyes are on Creon as his repute loses value Suicide in a paroxysm Now mourning over wife and child The maiden's neck Entwined by a linen band [chorus] "And in the things that touch upon the gods It is best, in word or deed, To shun unholy pride" |
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05-15-2004, 02:13 AM
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Midnight Marauder
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I got so many lyrics I can spare a song
SOON YOU'LL UNDERSTAND (Mike Game) Ma you dont understand cuz ya cryin and ya hurt. But you gon understand watch. (Singer overlaps Mike Game) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (Verse 1) I never thought itd be like this,you know what we went through Ten years from now thought I still see myself wit you They say change is gon happen and that its somethin good Ive seen the results I dont think its somethin good Still cant go to Burger King cuz itll never be the same The place we first met brings a nigga to pain Ive called you a few times to say that I miss you Remember you said you liked the way I kissedou I wanna call again but I know youll prolly just hang up People used to say we was dreamin and needed to wake up I guess we finally awakened when we decided to break up That fourth and final time cuz we'd usually just make up You knew my lifestyle the things that I did You knew I wasnt a manogamist type kid But I wanted you enough to give up all them other girls You made my decision of havin only one chick in my world Pain is love is the only truth Ja ever really spoke Cant really move on cuz my heart will be forever broke (Singer) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (Mike Game) I told you I wasnt the relationship type But for you I tried I wanna say Im sorry but I cant bring myself to it (Singer) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (Verse 2) Like I was Jiggaman girl you was my SUNSHINE Though the break up decision was mine I got scared cuz you mentioned the love word Though I felt it I never said it before Not like that but Ive said it to my mother Just never to my significant other Got you upset had you screamin at me Throwin things yellin "How could you do this to me?" I didnt have the answer so I started yellin back Slipped up called you a bitch and I got smacked I seen the tears fall to the floor As you left exitin the door Called the next day but your mom picked up the phone I was standin outside and I knew you was at home But she said you wasnt and not to call again Thats when the final heartbreak started to begin (Singer) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (Mike Game) I dont cry but this wouldve brought on the tears I mean look at the history 3 years together Kinda like a mini life (Singer) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (Verse 3) Bout a year done passed since you and me spoke last My cold heart is beginnin to heal you can say its in a cast Think bout you every so often but I done moved on, but I think bout what we had All of it,the nice,the,ugly,the good and the bad Just wanna let you know I did love you,though its too late for that Just lettin you know that if you need me Ill come right back If you ever need somethin Im never too far just call Ill drop everything Im doin I drop it all Got a new girl in my life she's sweet like you But I dont do her like I used to treat you I guess you was one of them one and gone types Only get her once cuz once shes gone shes gonethat I dont like It seems that basically no girl could ever compare But I dont even feel like takin this there Girl I never ever meant to make you sad nor cry Im sorry forever takt this as my final goodbye (Singer) Let him hold you Let him touch you Soon youll un-der-stand (repeat 6x) |
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