My New Weekly Column

[JH]

i'm starting this column and i'm hopeing to get it across the net on different sites and i would appreciate if you guys read it and respond with your thoughts good or bad
http://www.geocities.com/jhvt80/twis.html

[Mr. Nerfect]

Needs grammar. I can't fault you for your opinions, though. They're yours and if you want to voice them, go right ahead. :y:

[TerranRich]

Once you get past the run-on sentences, lack of coherency, and absence of punctuation, it's relaly not all that bad...

:shifty: What?

[JH]

yea i'm gonna edit everything i just started typing what came to my head and forgot to edit everything

[ThruTheWire]

Tell me when you fix it up and I will read it.

[JH]

it's edited
please guys post good or bad feedback i really do appreciate it

[Volchok]

yeah I wouldnt go out of my way to read it every week, I read the first uh.. I guess paragraph and then stopped.. but that's only me..

[ThruTheWire]

yeah I wouldnt go out of my way to read it every week, I read the first uh.. I guess paragraph and then stopped.. but that's only me..

Same here, I personally find it too opinionated. But prop's for writing all that.