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Old 08-29-2005, 06:25 PM   #1
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i'm starting this column and i'm hopeing to get it across the net on different sites and i would appreciate if you guys read it and respond with your thoughts good or bad
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Old 08-29-2005, 07:44 PM   #2
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Needs grammar. I can't fault you for your opinions, though. They're yours and if you want to voice them, go right ahead.
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:04 PM   #3
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Once you get past the run-on sentences, lack of coherency, and absence of punctuation, it's relaly not all that bad...

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Old 08-29-2005, 08:19 PM   #4
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yea i'm gonna edit everything i just started typing what came to my head and forgot to edit everything
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:25 PM   #5
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Tell me when you fix it up and I will read it.
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:39 PM   #6
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:45 PM   #7
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yeah I wouldnt go out of my way to read it every week, I read the first uh.. I guess paragraph and then stopped.. but that's only me..
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Old 08-29-2005, 08:47 PM   #8
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yeah I wouldnt go out of my way to read it every week, I read the first uh.. I guess paragraph and then stopped.. but that's only me..
Same here, I personally find it too opinionated. But prop's for writing all that.
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