View Full Version : Critique Needed
Dave Youell
11-02-2009, 03:53 PM
Fuck it, if other guys can try to get ego boosts:
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(I'm Dave Mercy)
Indifferent Clox
11-02-2009, 04:10 PM
very well done. I'd like to see your work in a bigger ring, and like a whole match so we can see your psychology etc.
Dave Youell
11-02-2009, 04:15 PM
very well done. I'd like to see your work in a bigger ring, and like a whole match so we can see your psychology etc.
That ring is the size of the old ECW ring, doubt we are going to get a bigger one.
As for psychology, lets just assume it was amazing kthnxbai!
Indifferent Clox
11-02-2009, 04:18 PM
There is no way that ring is the same size as Jerry Lynn's and RVD's!?
I really wish I could get some ring time around here. It's so ridiculously complicated to get into pro wrestling in Cleveland TN. URHGIJFOSIAJ
Indifferent Clox
11-02-2009, 04:19 PM
by that i mean it's not about money or being able to take bumps and work. It's about making friends with one of the two promoters.
Londoner
11-02-2009, 04:29 PM
I liked that vid a lot. Good stuff!
Blakeamus
11-02-2009, 08:27 PM
Good stuff man. Loved that German Suplex/Slice Bread spot. The Canadian Destroyer was great too. I had done that move successfully in a match back in July...what an adrenaline rush. Here is something I guess I should post here too. It was a video I made a while back when I started messing around with my movie maker.
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DAMN iNATOR
11-03-2009, 07:22 AM
I have nothing to say until you fix my quote in your sig, Mr. Youell.
Dave Youell
11-03-2009, 07:50 AM
I have nothing to say until you fix my quote in your sig, Mr. Youell.
Done :y:
[ /qoute] without the space after [ of course.
And about the video.
I'm not much of a wrestling expert, but it looks cool. Definetely closer in quality to televised events than let's say Chikara, or any other backyard hugfest I've seen.
DAMN iNATOR
11-03-2009, 08:58 AM
Well, OK, good enough. I'll not make a big deal out of it, although you did forget the / to close the quote but it's not that important.
What is important is that I must say your work definitely appears to be solid and whoever's behind the camera, and whoever does all the editing certainly must put out videos with high production values for a small time wrestling organization. But anyway, yeah, color me impressed.
Match Rating (OUT OF 2): :y: .75 (that's 1.75)
Dave Youell
11-03-2009, 09:33 AM
Well, OK, good enough. I'll not make a big deal out of it, although you did forget the / to close the quote but it's not that important.
What is important is that I must say your work definitely appears to be solid and whoever's behind the camera, and whoever does all the editing certainly must put out videos with high production values for a small time wrestling organization. But anyway, yeah, color me impressed.
Match Rating (OUT OF 2): :y: .75 (that's 1.75)
Ok, I have now sorted the sig.
I make the dvd’s and edited that video, so thank you for that compliment. I got a HD camcorder this year to make the footage sharper, it was all edited with Sony Vegas, I’m by no means an expert in the field, long term I want to get another camera and have a 2 shot approach, but I don’t have the money right now.
I might upload the whole match if people are interested. Just to see how the whole thing flows end to end.
Ol Dirty Dastard
11-03-2009, 09:37 AM
You're very good, very athletic. You just don't "stick out from the pack" but I mean it's easier said than done. You're fairly smooth and you clearly take it seriously.
All in all, quite legit.
Indifferent Clox
11-03-2009, 02:43 PM
yeah do a whole match.
thedamndest
11-04-2009, 07:04 PM
Very solid. I would like to see a whole match as well.
Your arena/ring is better than TNA's.
Dave Youell
11-05-2009, 10:15 AM
Good stuff man. Loved that German Suplex/Slice Bread spot. The Canadian Destroyer was great too. I had done that move successfully in a match back in July...what an adrenaline rush. Here is something I guess I should post here too. It was a video I made a while back when I started messing around with my movie maker.
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Just watched this through, for a bit guy you move really quick
Basically, all that looked smooth as fuck
Blakeamus
11-07-2009, 04:28 PM
The adrenaline man. The adrenaline.
Blakeamus
11-07-2009, 04:28 PM
Oh and thanks man
Dave Youell
11-07-2009, 06:59 PM
Obviously that was meant to say big guy, not bit guy.
Seriously, watched it again, very impressed with that.
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