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Old 11-02-2009, 03:53 PM   #1
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Old 11-02-2009, 04:10 PM   #2
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very well done. I'd like to see your work in a bigger ring, and like a whole match so we can see your psychology etc.
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Old 11-02-2009, 04:15 PM   #3
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very well done. I'd like to see your work in a bigger ring, and like a whole match so we can see your psychology etc.
That ring is the size of the old ECW ring, doubt we are going to get a bigger one.

As for psychology, lets just assume it was amazing kthnxbai!
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Old 11-02-2009, 04:18 PM   #4
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There is no way that ring is the same size as Jerry Lynn's and RVD's!?

I really wish I could get some ring time around here. It's so ridiculously complicated to get into pro wrestling in Cleveland TN. URHGIJFOSIAJ
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Old 11-02-2009, 04:19 PM   #5
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by that i mean it's not about money or being able to take bumps and work. It's about making friends with one of the two promoters.
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Old 11-02-2009, 04:29 PM   #6
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I liked that vid a lot. Good stuff!
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:27 PM   #7
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Good stuff man. Loved that German Suplex/Slice Bread spot. The Canadian Destroyer was great too. I had done that move successfully in a match back in July...what an adrenaline rush. Here is something I guess I should post here too. It was a video I made a while back when I started messing around with my movie maker.
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Old 11-05-2009, 10:15 AM   #8
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Good stuff man. Loved that German Suplex/Slice Bread spot. The Canadian Destroyer was great too. I had done that move successfully in a match back in July...what an adrenaline rush. Here is something I guess I should post here too. It was a video I made a while back when I started messing around with my movie maker.
Just watched this through, for a bit guy you move really quick

Basically, all that looked smooth as fuck
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Old 11-03-2009, 07:22 AM   #9
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I have nothing to say until you fix my quote in your sig, Mr. Youell.
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Old 11-03-2009, 07:50 AM   #10
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I have nothing to say until you fix my quote in your sig, Mr. Youell.
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Old 11-03-2009, 08:03 AM   #11
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[ /qoute] without the space after [ of course.
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Old 11-03-2009, 08:13 AM   #12
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And about the video.

I'm not much of a wrestling expert, but it looks cool. Definetely closer in quality to televised events than let's say Chikara, or any other backyard hugfest I've seen.
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Old 11-03-2009, 08:58 AM   #13
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Well, OK, good enough. I'll not make a big deal out of it, although you did forget the / to close the quote but it's not that important.

What is important is that I must say your work definitely appears to be solid and whoever's behind the camera, and whoever does all the editing certainly must put out videos with high production values for a small time wrestling organization. But anyway, yeah, color me impressed.

Match Rating (OUT OF 2): .75 (that's 1.75)
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Old 11-03-2009, 09:33 AM   #14
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Well, OK, good enough. I'll not make a big deal out of it, although you did forget the / to close the quote but it's not that important.

What is important is that I must say your work definitely appears to be solid and whoever's behind the camera, and whoever does all the editing certainly must put out videos with high production values for a small time wrestling organization. But anyway, yeah, color me impressed.

Match Rating (OUT OF 2): .75 (that's 1.75)

Ok, I have now sorted the sig.

I make the dvd’s and edited that video, so thank you for that compliment. I got a HD camcorder this year to make the footage sharper, it was all edited with Sony Vegas, I’m by no means an expert in the field, long term I want to get another camera and have a 2 shot approach, but I don’t have the money right now.

I might upload the whole match if people are interested. Just to see how the whole thing flows end to end.
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Old 11-03-2009, 09:37 AM   #15
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You're very good, very athletic. You just don't "stick out from the pack" but I mean it's easier said than done. You're fairly smooth and you clearly take it seriously.

All in all, quite legit.
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Old 11-03-2009, 02:43 PM   #16
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yeah do a whole match.
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Old 11-04-2009, 07:04 PM   #17
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Very solid. I would like to see a whole match as well.

Your arena/ring is better than TNA's.
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Old 11-07-2009, 04:28 PM   #18
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Old 11-07-2009, 04:28 PM   #19
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Old 11-07-2009, 06:59 PM   #20
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Obviously that was meant to say big guy, not bit guy.

Seriously, watched it again, very impressed with that.
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