just made a new song

[Penner]

http://www.myspace.com/andrewpennermusic

"Delusions of Grandeur"

Check it out. Lemme know what you think.

[Sixx]

It's horrible.

[Brujesino]

oh god that singer is so gay:rofl:

kick that guy out unless that guy is you hang yourself

[Penner]

its all me, guitar and vocals, drums are a drum program

[CSL]

Yeah, vocals are weak (recording quality doesn't help that) but other than that, I've certainly heard worse. 'Mad props' for actually getting on doing this stuff also

[CSL]

oh god that singer is so gay:rofl:

kick that guy out unless that guy is you hang yourself

its all me, guitar and vocals, drums are a drum program

lol though

[The Mask]

it's not your best. i'd scrap the song but keep the riff from about 1:55 onwards for use in something else, because that's pretty cool and it's not a bad ending.

[Brujesino]

just listened to it again

ill stick with what i said you suck as a singer

your guitar playing is good stick with that and look for a singer

[Penner]

is it that my voice is too *sweet* sounding for the style of music? that's what I was thinking as well

[The Mask]

you did a terrible job of mixing your vocals into that tbh. it sounds like karaoke, it's too loud for the music, the reverb is crap and your delivery is too soft.

[Penner]

Noted. I will try to improve it.

[The Mask]

sorry, i guess i'm coming off as a cock here, i love you really. but yeah you've got an aggressive song which sounds loud and then a really quietly sung vocal way over it.

[Penner]

Yeah I write metal guitar but when I open my mouth that is what comes out.

It is different, which is good I guess?

[The Mask]

maybe you should go for more of a my bloody valentine sound or something. might work. perhaps overdrive your voice if you have any way to do that.

[Penner]

I need to record it with singing it harsher.

Again, I live with roommates so I'm not using the full volume of my voice. I need to record it using more *balls* if you know what I mean.

[Big Fat Mike]

Yeah, you're saying that you need to grow a set.

[The Mask]

nah i know what you mean, i sing pretty quiet at home too. singing loud is hard. i always sound like some retarded joe strummer despite the fact i'm not from london.