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Old 01-07-2010, 03:59 PM   #1
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just made a new song
http://www.myspace.com/andrewpennermusic

"Delusions of Grandeur"

Check it out. Lemme know what you think.


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Old 01-07-2010, 04:01 PM   #2
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Old 01-07-2010, 06:05 PM   #3
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oh god that singer is so gay

kick that guy out unless that guy is you hang yourself
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Old 01-07-2010, 07:16 PM   #4
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its all me, guitar and vocals, drums are a drum program
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Old 01-07-2010, 09:08 PM   #5
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Yeah, vocals are weak (recording quality doesn't help that) but other than that, I've certainly heard worse. 'Mad props' for actually getting on doing this stuff also
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Old 01-07-2010, 09:09 PM   #6
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oh god that singer is so gay

kick that guy out unless that guy is you hang yourself
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its all me, guitar and vocals, drums are a drum program
lol though
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Old 01-07-2010, 09:53 PM   #7
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it's not your best. i'd scrap the song but keep the riff from about 1:55 onwards for use in something else, because that's pretty cool and it's not a bad ending.
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Old 01-08-2010, 04:06 AM   #8
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just listened to it again

ill stick with what i said you suck as a singer

your guitar playing is good stick with that and look for a singer
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Old 01-08-2010, 09:44 AM   #9
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is it that my voice is too *sweet* sounding for the style of music? that's what I was thinking as well
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Old 01-08-2010, 05:35 PM   #10
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you did a terrible job of mixing your vocals into that tbh. it sounds like karaoke, it's too loud for the music, the reverb is crap and your delivery is too soft.
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Old 01-08-2010, 09:19 PM   #11
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Noted. I will try to improve it.
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Old 01-08-2010, 10:54 PM   #12
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sorry, i guess i'm coming off as a cock here, i love you really. but yeah you've got an aggressive song which sounds loud and then a really quietly sung vocal way over it.
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Old 01-09-2010, 02:39 AM   #13
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Yeah I write metal guitar but when I open my mouth that is what comes out.

It is different, which is good I guess?
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Old 01-14-2010, 03:51 AM   #14
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maybe you should go for more of a my bloody valentine sound or something. might work. perhaps overdrive your voice if you have any way to do that.
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Old 01-14-2010, 02:39 PM   #15
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I need to record it with singing it harsher.

Again, I live with roommates so I'm not using the full volume of my voice. I need to record it using more *balls* if you know what I mean.
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Old 01-14-2010, 10:18 PM   #16
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Yeah, you're saying that you need to grow a set.
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Old 01-15-2010, 12:06 AM   #17
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nah i know what you mean, i sing pretty quiet at home too. singing loud is hard. i always sound like some retarded joe strummer despite the fact i'm not from london.
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