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Old 10-26-2015, 09:38 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by CSL View Post
you still look uncomfortable/almost nervous. First thing the little guy is does is give you (the big guy) a wrist lock and you ACTUALLY SELL IT, just throw the elbow straight in his face. Don't sell so much, why would people buy into a menacing giant if every shot from a guy that looks like he's climbed out of the audience/looks just like themselves gives you looks like it's really doing damage/hurting you? You don't see Brock drop to his knees a minute into a match, no matter what he gets hit with. Nor on his back as you were straight after, still a minute or so into the match (I'm writing as I watch this) you could have cut out most of that stuff (namely his offence) before the sleeper/throw him off spot. It doesn't need to be so "7 deadly steps" in terms of shine, cutoff, heat etc, the small babyface should be fighting from underneath pretty much the whole time, big man vs. little man is the easiest thing to do in all of wrestling. They've already seen you can be knocked around/hurt/taken off your feet, it doesn't really matter how much he bumps for you/if you throw him around/get your shit in after.

In short: it was a big guy/little guy match and the little guy had most of the offence. When you're being put over as "nearly 7 feet tall" you need to protect yourself/your heat, you shouldn't have been giving him anywhere near that much (unless the plan was to make you look like shit, which I doubt was the case) you have to stand up for yourself and speak up, take charge of a match, that match should have been all you in terms of leading the match, in terms of offence etc. You even see it on TV in WWE, TNA etc, from top to bottom, guys selling for way too long and then wondering why nobody really gives a shit about them. People aren't going to buy you as a giant just because you try and walk like one.

That said your gear is much better now (a huge plus), definitely suits you more and there didn't really seem to be anything wrong with what you were doing when you did it.
This is harsh but fair criticism. I think you have tons of potential, but the things I saw wrong with the match are exactly the same as CSL has brought up here (I just didn't want to shit on your parade lol) . I love all of your improvements and love your enthusiasm and work ethic, but you need to kick the piss out of that little jobber, you're huge. You need to wrestle like you're huge. If little job squads don't like it, tell them to try do something about it in the ring, because you need to keep your heat.

They are billing you as a big man, so wrestle like a big man.
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